Tuning some old work

So I've been working on editing my recent work, and I find myself thinking (especially at work)

"Why don't I work on some old stuff too?"

Well Ive put Bed Ridden Agony and Reapers fall on my 'Work on editing this crap' list.  I'm not sure how many of you have read either of these, but you can find both of them under the Death Inc, label if you care to read them in their present condition (present condition... Crap) I think ill post the most recent edit of Upgrade to Edited Works Unlimited if anyone cares, it is somewhat different from the current post. RE-birth, isn't ready for Edited works yet... but in due time it'll make the move, it has been worked on a little, but not enough to warrant a post there.  I chose these two stories, cause I've felt melancholic lately and what better to work on then stuff I wrote in that same mindset? don't look forward to either of them coming up soon. But they will come when their ready.

More like the last one 3

A
- Available: Yes, but not currently in the market
- Age: 24
- Annoyance: society
- Animal: snake, wolf

B
- Beer: what about it?
- Birthday: 07/20/1986
- Best Friend: Josh
- Blind or Deaf: if i was blind i wouldnt be doing this
- Best weather: Autumn will always have a place in my heart
- Been in Love: no
- Believe in Santa: no

C
- Candy: Twix, Haribo Frogs-cola, Snickers
- Color: Black, blue, red
- Chocolate/Vanilla: Vanilla is boring, chocolate
- Chinese/Mexican Food: chinese
- Cake or pie: PIE
- Continent to visit: whatever works
- Cheese: ... so... GOOD

D
- Day or Night: day
- Dancing in the rain: in a stormtrooper outfit

E
- Eyes: brown
- Everyone's got: a side they should never show anyone
- Ever failed a class: no

F
- First thoughts waking up: I dont want to go to work
- Food: is tasty and i believe i will continue to eat it

G
- Greatest Fear: betrayal
- Goals: are a good thing to have...
- Gum: im picky
- Get along with your parents: yeah

H
- Hair Color: dark brown
- Height: 6'3"
- Happy: right now? not really
- Holiday: christmas
- How do you want to die: not die, cheat death
- Ice Cream: White chocolate with gummybears, pie crust and twix
- Instrument: i would like to learn bass

J
- Jewelry: two necklaces, a watch, two gaskets and two bands
- Job: Now? I/M tech, future? Producer/writer

K
- Kids: not my style
- Kick boxing or karate: guns
- Keep a journal: i live drama and i hate re-runs

L
- Love: friends, my car, videogames, manga, anime
- Laughed so hard you cried: yes but not recently

M
- Milk flavor: 2%, chocolate, i also like banana and strawberry
- Movies: are good when done right, think hollywood THINK!
- Motion sickness: almost non-existent
- McD’s or BK: I dont eat at mcdonalds anymore, gross!

N
- Number: 3, 13, 64, 360

O
- One wish: some genie you turned out to be... loser

P
- Pepsi/Coke: usually coke, but i tend to switch between the two on a non-regular basis
- Perfect Pizza: sausage, pepperoni, chicken, on a cheese filled crust lined with garlic
- Piercings: nope

Q
- Quail: is a bird

R
- Reality T.V.: i dont need reality TV, i work at a job that is interesting enough
- Radio Station: 94.9, 96.3, 99.5,
- Roll your tongue in a circle: Wee!
- Ring size: I dunno, ask austin what the ring thing's size is

S
- Song: Bad company, dear agony, gun in hand
- Shoe size: 15
- Salad Dressing: ranch FTW
- Sushi: dont like it, but ive been told i was doing it wrong
- In the shower: I miss my shower radio
- Strawberries/Blueberries: Blueberries are awesome

T
- Tattoos: contemplating it
- Time for bed: soon, not yet
- Thunderstorms: damn things are loud

U
- Unpredictable: society

V
- Vacation spot(s): Japan

W
- Weakness: too trusting
- Which one of your friends acts the most like you: they dont their individuals
- Worst feeling: the one im usually in is frustration
- Worst Weather: cant decide between Winter and Construction

X
- X-rays: +40 Rads

Y
-Year it is now: 2010
-Yellow: now you listen here bucko, i aint Yella

Z
- Zoo animal: tigers

More like the last one 2

1. ONE OF YOUR SCARS, HOW DID YOU GET IT?
eyes... surgery 

2. WHAT IS ON THE WALLS IN YOUR ROOM?
posters, thats about it
3. DO YOU SNORE, GRIND YOUR TEETH, OR TALK IN YOUR SLEEP?
apparently from two good sources it is said that i snore

4. WHAT TYPE OF MUSIC DO YOU LISTEN TO?
rock, techno, anime music, the list goes on

5. DO YOU KNOW WHAT TIME YOU WERE BORN?
11:45 if i remember

6. WHAT DO YOU WANT MORE THAN ANYTHING RIGHT NOW?
Security
7. WHAT DO YOU MISS?
that one day way back when...

8. WHAT IS YOUR MOST PRIZED POSSESSION(S)?
Friends

9. HOW TALL ARE YOU?
6'4"

10. DO YOU GET CLAUSTROPHOBIC?
not really but if i get paranoid, it can get a little out of hand

11. DO YOU GET SCARED IN THE DARK?
when I'm paranoid

12. THE LAST PERSON TO MAKE YOU CRY?
last person... dunno 

13. WHAT'S YOUR WORST FEAR?
betrayal 

14. WHAT KIND OF HAIR/EYE COLOR DO YOU LIKE ON THE OPPOSITE SEX?
green eyes and dark hair (like really dark)

15. WHERE CAN YOU SEE YOURSELF BEING PROPOSED TO AT?
...

16. COFFEE OR ENERGY DRINK?
Energy Drink, no contest 

18. IF YOU COULD EAT ANYTHING RIGHT NOW, WHAT WOULD IT BE?
actually some Ramen sounds good

19. FAVORITE COLOR OF ALL TIME?
blue... no black... no...

20. HAVE YOU EVER EATEN A GOLDFISH?
all the time, their in a bag at the local shop

21. WHAT WAS THE FIRST MEANINGFUL GIFT YOU'VE EVER RECEIVED?
awareness

22. DO YOU HAVE A CRUSH?
Nothing but a waste of time
23. ARE YOU DOUBLE JOINTED?
No

24. FAVORITE CLOTHING BRAND?
i just wear whatever looks fine

25. WHO IS YOUR FAV FEMALE/MALE CELEBRITY?
we'll just go with voice actors for this. Crispin Freeman for one and Monica Rial for the other

26. DO YOU HAVE A PET RIGHT NOW?
a little Field goal named after a motorcycle 

27. WHAT KIND IS IT?
Dog, and i mean that term loosely

28. WOULD YOU FALL IN LOVE KNOWING THAT THE PERSON IS LEAVING?
what a waste of time and effort

30. SAY A NUMBER FROM ONE TO A HUNDRED:
13

31. BLONDES OR BRUNETTES?
brunette

32. FAVORITE QUOTE?
"OBSTRUCTION DETECTED. COMPOSITION: TITANIUM ALLOY SUPPLEMENTED BY PHOTONIC RESONANCE BARRIER. PROBABILITY OF MISSION HINDRANCE... ZERO PERCENT!!" -Liberty Prime


33. FAVORITE PLACE?
anywhere where we're doing something interesting

34. HAVE YOU BEEN OUT OF THE USA?
Not yet

35. YOUR WEAKNESSES?
where to start...
36. MET ANYONE FAMOUS?
a few

37. FIRST JOB?
... still there 


38. EVER DONE A PRANK CALL?
Yup

39. DO YOU THINK EVERYONE OUT THERE HAS A SOULMATE?
wishful thinking 

40. WHAT WERE YOU DOING BEFORE YOU FILLED THIS OUT?
watching youtube
41. HAVE YOU EVER HAD SURGERY?
... 11 of them

42. WHAT DO YOU GET COMPLIMENTED ABOUT MOST?
... hair? 


43. HAVE YOU EVER HAD BRACES?
Nope

44. WHAT DO YOU WANT FOR YOUR BIRTHDAY?
I got a crowbar!

45. HOW MANY KIDS DO YOU WANT AND THEIR NAMES?
no thanks

46. WERE YOU NAMED AFTER ANYONE?
not... that i know of my middle name is after my grandfather Keith hess

47. WHAT IS THE BIGGEST TURN OFF OF THE OPPOSITE SEX?
ignorance

48. WHAT IS ONE THING YOU LIKE ABOUT HIGH SCHOOL?
Friends

49. WHAT KIND OF SHAMPOO DO YOU USE?
i actually use Dove... what? a guy cant use Dove? 

50. DO YOU LIKE YOUR HANDWRITING?
are you serious? have you seen my handwriting?

51. WHAT IS YOUR FAVORITE LUNCH MEAT?
chicken

52. ANY GOOD HABITS?
psh... somebody tell me if i have any good habits... i cant think of them right now 

53. ARE YOU A JEALOUS PERSON?
I think so
54. IF YOU WERE ANOTHER PERSON, WOULD YOU BE FRIENDS WITH YOU?
um...

55. DO YOU AGREE WITH FRIENDS WITH BENEFITS?
...uh 

56. DO LOOKS MATTER?
what you look like is what people see first, that is where the first impression of anyone comes from

# 57 and 58 are missing.. 
Damn, i was looking forward to those too

59. WHAT'S YOUR MAIN GOAL IN LIFE?
security

60. WHAT WAS YOUR FAVORITE TOY AS A CHILD?
HotWheels

61. HOW MANY NUMBERS ARE IN YOUR CELL PHONE?
40+
62.WERE YOU A FAN OF BARNEY AS A LITTLE KID?
...yes

63. Do you use sarcasm?
a bit, it usually gets lost before the other person gets it 

64. MASHED POTATOES OR MACARONI AND CHEESE?
mac and cheese

65. WHAT DO YOU LOOK FOR IN A GUY/GIRL?
an otaku
66. WHAT ARE YOUR NICKNAMES?
Booster, dirtyBIRD, Marcus Wheeler, 

67. IF YOU HAD A SUPER POWER WHAT WOULD IT BE?
super speed 

68. WHAT'S YOUR FAVORITE TV SHOW?
Future weapons 

69.WHAT'S THE BEST WAY TO DEAL WITH YOUR ENEMIES?
keep a Grand marquis nearby, a black one 

70. WHAT'S YOUR FAVORITE ICE CREAM FLAVOR?
white chocolate with twix, pie crust and gummy bears

71. DO YOU HAVE ALL YOUR FINGERS AND TOES?
Yup

72. DO YOU HAVE A COMPUTER IN YOUR ROOM?
my laptop 


73. PLANS FOR TONIGHT?
sleep 

74. WHERE DO YOU WANT TO LIVE WHEN YOU ARE OLDER?
away from people, people are stupid

75. DO YOU WANT EVERYONE TO ANSWER THESE QUESTIONS?
sure

76. WHAT ARE YOU LISTENING TO?
Shuffle on my Zune
77. LAST THING YOU DRANK?
Jones soda
78. LAST PERSON YOU TALKED TO ON THE PHONE?
mom

79. THE FIRST THING YOU NOTICE IN THE OPPOSITE SEX?
eyes 

80. WHAT DO YOU LIKE TO DO IN YOUR SPARE TIME?
whatever keeps me from being bored out of my skull 

81. FAVORITE THING TO HATE?
society

82. FAVORITE SEASON OF THE YEAR?
autumn 

83. WHAT'S YOUR FAVORITE TYPE OF CANDY?
gummy candy

84. HAVE YOU EVER REALLY AND TRULY HAD A BEST FRIEND?
Yup

85. WHAT IS YOUR HAIR COLOR?
brown

86. EYE COLOR?
brown 


87. SHOE SIZE?
15...

88. FAVORITE FAST FOOD PLACE?
i eat out too much to like just one 

89. FAVORITE RESTAURANT?
see #88

90. DO YOU LIKE SUSHI?
NO!

91. WATCH TV TODAY?
Nope. 

92. FAVORITE DAY OF THE YEAR?
my day off

93. PLAY ANY MUSICAL INSTRUMENTS?
i used to play the cello way back when 

94. REPUBLICAN OR DEMOCRAT?
ill tell you what I'm not, I'm most certainly NOT Contrarionist

95. KISSES OR HUGS?
Frenching

96. RELATIONSHIPS OR ONE NIGHT STANDS?
dont care for either at the moment

97. WHAT WAS THE LAST THING YOU BOUGHT?
breakfast at Ihop
98. WOULD YOU EVER BE A HOUSEWIFE?
...

99. WHAT BOOK ARE YOU READING?
started Catching Fire not that long ago
100. DESCRIBE YOUR LOVE LIFE?
I cant describe something I've never experienced