Monday, December 22, 2008

Breakout: blood riot (Staged)

Blargh... its been a while since ive written something, so lets see if we cant get at least a tangent down on paper, ive had this brewing in my skull for who knows how long itll be nice to put it down finally. its another super short story about my Vampire Anna, and once again this will not be cannonized until i find that im satisfied with this.

one last thing, the content that follows has some graphic detail so if your a wuss or not interested then i suggest you wait for my next post.

Breakout: blood riot

It was a cold night outside, the Rain was coming down so hard it felt like liquid marbles were striking against Anna's body. Anna was dead tired, she had gotten herself into a fight that she was never able to handle. it was her third mission as an official member of GGX, feeling overconfident with herself she decided to take a job that would challenge her limits as a confident vampire, but the target was more than she bargained for.

she lay in the middle of a parking lot in the dead of night, soaked in rain and half dismembered. while confronting her target she had been overwhelmed and had an arm and a leg ripped clean from her small body, and she lay with an old english sword in her back, keeping her pinned in the ground for the last hour as the target sits in the warehouse.

Anna, weak from bloodloss, couldnt do a thing to pull herself out of her predicament. she heard a door open, someone was walking to meet her. the young man held an umbrella and a can of soda.

"how ya feelin' there pretty? uncomfortable? thats too bad" he crouched in front of her and used the handle of the umbrella to move some of Anna'a hair out of her face.

"the big guy is inside wonderin' what to do with ya, he sure appreciated the chance to taste some real vampire cuisine"

"you... bastards..." Anna managed to say. she coughed and that was the end of it.

"ate your arm and leg? just the boss, he's a real fan of the bones i gotta tell ya" he tipped the can in his mouth and finised of the contents. the smell was starting to get to Anna, she wanted his blood so much it was unbearable. the thug looked around then looked back at her. he grabbed the sword in her back and wrenched it backward, Anna couldnt yell, all she managed was a squeeky grunt as the edge of the sword dug into more of her. after a second the thug drove the handle of the umbrella into the gapping wound so it would stand on its own.

"thats better now my hands are free, this is just gonna be a small idea of whats in store for you once the boss is satisfied with his meal" he started to play with the empty can, twisting it and punching holes in it. he jerked his hand away and yelped.

"ouch, im bleeding, better wrap that up before-" his speech was ended. Anna using her unique blood control, formed the blood from his cut finger into a spike and pierced his head. Anna was getting anxious, the blood couldnt contact the rain if she was to free herself, any water would contaminate the blood. she slowly moved the body closer and hung the wound near her mouth.

after a small drink she could feel her strength coming back. her muscles got tense and the sword started to hurt more, her remaining limbs started to work again. she pushed with all her might and ran the whole sword through herself, her scream of pain was masked by the powerful thunder. she threw herself at the body and drank, she drank like she had never had a taste of blood in her whole undead life. it was such a satisfying feeling, but she wasnt really satisfied, she threw the body aside and crawled towards the warehouse.

the door opened and another thug appeared, he looked over to see Anna leap on him and send both of them into the building, she bit into him and took as much as she could. she could feel her wounds changing, she didnt know how to regenerate lost body parts but something was happening.

more enemies appeared and Anna looked around. their boss was not amongst them, the smell of their blood was overwhelming, she needed more. one of the thugs took a few shots at her with a pistol, opening parts in her back. she didnt feel pain from them but she was definitely in agony from everything else that was happening. she looked around, then her vision got blurry, she became 'bloodblind' her body moved and acted based on her need to feed on those around her.

she could feel herself leap about, standing on something that replaced her leg for the moment, her missing arm, it felt like it was thrashing though bodies like a sword. she felt an extreme pressure against her stomach and her blindness wore off.

it was the boss, her target had made his presence known. she looked at herself as best she could. her leg was a collection of spikes and jagged edges, like a spiked club. and her arm, her missing arm was replaced with a giant hatchet, brutal and intimidating. her target was chewing on a bone he broke it in half and tossed some of it aside, he then started to pick at his teeth like it was a toothpick.

"i have to say, i havent had such a good meal in a while, such a fine taste and texture you have, its... nostalgic" he licked his lips and tossed the bone to her.

"you werewolves are disgusting, the only exeption is a close friend of mine, you're gonna be ground into dog food for pets at the pound" her target started to laugh.

"you really think your 'friend' is different from me? dont kid yourself, we're like this for a reason, just like your one of them for a reason, we're all treading the same path to crazytown"

"you are narrow minded, you cant see the bigger picture, but from what ive seen so far its just your nature. Im tired of the chit-chat, so why dont we start the dance already?" Anna struggled to stand, her temporary leg wasnt able to bend so she had to hug the wall.

"do you actually think you can take me on? in your condition? you didnt have a chance when you had all your pieces, what hope do you have now?" her target removed another english sword from its sheath and took stance.

"i have a trump card to play still, now with our new positions, i believe i will be cashing it in"

{satellite disruption}

i feel pretty good now, like my spark has flickered, comments? critiques? throw'em at me

3 comments:

Jaycey said...

Sorry. I did not read it.

I'm not a big fan of blood.

Unknown said...

i was sure you wouldnt, its not for you

Jaycey said...

well now i want one